Tuesday, 24 April 2012

Who reads poetry? by Philip Lyons


Who reads poetry? I guess you do or else why would you be looking at the Poetry Space website? Perhaps you write the stuff too and are keen to find somewhere that will publish your work. There are many of us in the same boat, expressing ourselves in verse and reaching out to an audience that doesn’t appear to be that interested. If so many people admit to turning their hand to writing poetry, especially when faced with an emotional crisis or a significant event in their lives, why aren’t more people reading it?

I occasionally run writing workshops and I remember one participant telling the group that she didn’t read anyone else’s poetry because she didn’t want it to influence her own. But it’s precisely through reading poetry by other people that we learn about the craft and about the range of possibilities that the form offers. I am proud of my influences – George Herbert, Robert Frost, Sylvia Plath, Philip Larkin, Tony Harrison, to name just a few – even as they look over my shoulder while I’m writing and tut when I settle for a cliché or an easy rhyme.

Poetry exists because there is a tradition, and each time we sit down to write a new poem we are drawing on that tradition, whether we choose to emulate, challenge or disparage it. I only know what poetry is from reading it. I get as much pleasure from reading a good poem as I do from trying to write one, but how do I decide that it’s good? Not because the critics tell me it is, that’s for sure. I recently had a stab at reading a highly-acclaimed first collection by a rising star and felt both unmoved and frustrated, unmoved because a certain coldness seemed to permeate the language and frustrated because the poems were scattered with abstruse references that even the notes didn’t really illuminate.

If that collection could be said to represent the zenith of contemporary poetry, perhaps that’s why so few people are reading it. I don’t want to get into an argument about elitism versus inclusiveness, but in spite of being educated to a high level I struggle when I leaf through the slim volumes in the poetry section of a bookshop (the section itself getting ever slimmer) to find anything I want to read. At the risk of turning this into a manifesto for my own work, I write what might be described as middlebrow poetry, written to appeal to the same literate public that enjoys reading novels by Nick Hornby or Anne Tyler, say, and watching episodes of Frasier on television. If more of this kind of poetry was made available and promoted – and I know it’s being written by plenty of poets other than me – I am confident more people would read poetry, as something that gives pleasure or that speaks to the heart, and not something to turn to only when someone gets married or dies. 


Philip Lyons April 2012

Philip's first full collection Like It Is  is published by Poetry Space Ltd and available from

Saturday, 24 March 2012

To Pay or Not to Pay and Considering Payback - Anne Stewart

I’m not entering competitions, it’s just a lottery. The winning poems aren’t usually much good. And why should I pay to have my work accepted?

Yes, I’ve heard all that. But isn’t it a lottery going in with another thousand poems to an editor? It won’t be the first published poem that’s below par because ‘merit’ has skipped the equation. And aren’t there poets who subscribe to journals in hopes of increasing their chances of selection?

We pursue publication for one reason only. We want to get our poetry out there. ‘Competition’ poetry organisations need our support as much as magazines do, so why not widen our targets and opportunities?

The ‘successful’ list in competitions is very short. It ought to speak as highly (more perhaps?) of those poets as magazine publication does. Submissions are anonymous, so poems are most definitely being considered only on their merit. Your reward may be simply a mention in dispatches but, more commonly, the work is published and offers a reading. You may even cover your costs. At best, you may earn some real income... and, if it’s one of the prestigious nationals (congratulations!), a boost in awareness of your work that’s hard to achieve otherwise.

When I won the Bridport Prize (and excluding ARTEMISpoetry, who ‘wrote it large’ – thank you!), there was a disconcerting silence in the poetry press, which I believe is unusual. Even then, after a few months, invitations arrived to run workshops, give readings, and judge a fledgling poetry competition.
When I won the Southport Poetry Competition, it came with an invitation to read in Merseyside where, probably, no one had ever heard of me.

And a long-listing in the National Poetry Competition? Well, I guess I’m about to find out.

Anne Stewart

Anne Stewart is the founder of www.poetrypf.co.uk and Administrator of Second Light, a network of women poets. Her first collection, The Janus Hour, was published in 2010 by Oversteps Books. She is co-editor of five issues of Second Light’s ARTEMISpoetry.




Wednesday, 1 February 2012

Poetry Space events coming up


A few Poetry Space events to draw your attention to early in 2012:

·        Poetry Space at The Poetry Cafe on Saturday 4th February from 7 till 10pm.
This will include readings from Both Derek Adams (winning poet in PS competition 2011) Beverley Ferguson, winning poet in PS competition 2010), Mike Lee (2nd place      in comp. 10), Rose Flint, our judge from 2011, David R. Morgan and lots of other voices from the floor. I’d love to hear from you if you would like to come along.
Copies of Poetry Space Books will be on sale including our wonderful new Green Spaces anthology.

·        Finding A Voice: a Poetry Space Writing Day with Philip Lyons. Saturday March 10th, City of Bristol College, College Green Bristol 10am till 4pm.
           £30 if you book before January 31st plus a further discount if you are a Lapidus member or currently subscribe to Poetry Space Facebook group. Places limited to 14 in total.

·         Poetry Space Writing Retreat June 22nd to June 25th  (Friday evening till Monday morning)  at Coombe Farm Woodlands Trust, Tiverton Devon. £250 for three nights full board. No organised writing activities however participants are free to offer an activity for others. Places limited to 14 maximum (ten minimum) Some shared rooms. Swimming pool. 180 acres woodland.


Best wishes for a creative 2012,

Sue

Monday, 2 January 2012

Inspired by Nature - Juliet Wilson



I grew up in suburban Manchester and was always interested in nature. I was an avid birdwatcher from an early age, and took every opportunity to take up binoculars whether in the garden or on family holidays. My first published piece of writing was when I was nine and I had a very short piece about (for some reason!) penguins published in the hospital magazine when I was a patient for a month. I also had a piece in the local church magazine when I was a young teenager. However, apart from that, and although my English teacher always praised my work, it wasn't until I left University that I first started writing at all seriously. 


Soon after graduation I moved to Malaŵi for two years. The wonderful scenery and wildlife were totally inspiring and although I worked very hard as a teacher I found myself with plenty of spare time (and there was no such thing as TV in Malaŵi in those days). I naturally found myself using a fair amount of this time to write. 
My first published poetry pamphlet was Bougainvillea Dancing a collection mostly inspired by my time in Malaŵi, which raised money for charities working in Malaŵi.

I currently work as a part time adult education tutor, leading birdwatching walks and teaching creative writing. I also volunteer for the Water of Leith Conservation Trust, which looks after one of Edinburgh's rivers. I walk along a stretch of the river every week, noting the wildlife and collecting litter. Every walk is different, I love watching the seasons change. The area I walk along is a real haven for wildlife, several species of bird live here and I sometimes see deer running beside the river (remember, this is not far from the centre of Edinburgh!). So as well as collecting litter, I always end up collecting inspiration for poetry! There's direct inspiration in terms of observing specific things that become a haiku for example or a short story. There's also indirect inspiration – just being out of doors, surrounded by nature is inspiring in itself. 


© Juliet Wilson

Juliet's poem Cows in Meadow Flowers is published in Green Spaces: Poems From Poetry Space Competition 2012. Buy it from Poetry Space Bookshop £4.95until January 31st (retail price £5.95) 

Visit Juliet's own site at:
http://craftygreenpoet.blogspot.com/

Sunday, 25 December 2011

Christmas Poems


Happy Christmas to all Poetry Space Supporters and everyone who reads this today.

I don't want to die at Christmas

I don't want to die at Christmas
cheated of that warm turkey sandwich
on the eve of day.
I don't want to miss the glint in your eye
as you unwrap the surprise
of a hint remembered.
I don't want to rob Santa of his jolly jaunt
and leave a gift of tears instead
wrapping the day in melancholly
and the promise of earth to earth....
I don't want to eclipse the word made flesh
by flesh unmaking itself
in the denial of breath.
But if I die
near the day of days
wrap me in tinsel and coloured paper.
Leave me under a tree
and sing carols by lamplight:
'Joy to the world',
'Come and join the celebration',
'See amid the winter snow',
and dance,
let there be dancing.
And place the last advent candle
at my feet
to warm
my
sole.

© Keith Wallis


Christmas Turkey

We purchase the ginormous, scraped-out bird
and garage it until Ovening Eve.
It has to be outsized with so many two-day,
Christmas mouths to feed; Ten, including
the in-laws, my mum, the unmarried uncle
and his silent ‘friend’.  Takes two of us to cradle
the consecrated carcass, steam-screaming,
from sacristy to linen, carving altar.   

Usually, the kids religiously take turns to gnaw upon
the weekend legs; so we concoct another Yule-tide lie;
calling it Custom to offer limbs, wings and all things
bony to visiting elders with teeth enough to gnaw.
“I likes a bit of breast m’self,” I boast, winking at
Her spooning out the veg and trimmings and blushing;
while watching our three wince at even the tiniest helpings
of sprouts and parsnips, sage and stuffing.

After all this preparation, dressing, cooking, carving 
and flimsy, paper-hatted, out-of-character jollity   
I know our three would be more than Christmas happy
if only they served bread and cranberry sauce at K.F.C. 

© Mike Lee
 
SILENT NIGHT

The sun could not destroy
the cold season of winter nights
neither, could it conceal the Robin
from the blooming roses
and candle lights,
frosty flowers and singing birds.

The stars could not dim its flare
of shooting wishes and dancing array
nor the moon, dye its boon
in a natural sky, of Jesus’ birth.

Children find peace at the country-yard
dreaming morning Zebras with magical spice of Santa’s gifts
and shed every little joy ‘till eternity.

A scene in my head,
a Christmas ushered, in midnight blue.

© Michael Kwaku Kesse Somuah (Ghana)2011

Friday, 16 December 2011

My Style - Rosalind Adam


I love writing poetry but I do it in My Style. I’ve never been particularly knowledgeable about the theory of poetry. I can’t tell my terza rima from my quatrain, so recently I decided to do something about it. I bought a copy of Stephen Fry’s The Ode Less Travelled. I have to confess to being a Stephen Fry fan and this book is written as if he’s sitting there talking to me, so I happily launched myself into the first few chapters, and ploughed through his many and varied exercises that he kept insisting I complete. The annoying thing was that nothing inspiring fell onto the page. It was no good. I couldn’t write poetry to a formula and I put Stephen and his vast literary knowledge onto my bookshelf so that I could return to writing in My Style.

So what is My Style? It’s whatever sounds right. I count the metre but I don’t stick rigidly to it. A rhyme or half-rhyme makes it a more satisfying piece of work for me but I’m not obsessive about it. The interesting thing is that if I play around and change a line to improve the metre or rhyme, the altered version is always, without fail, a great improvement on the original. And as soon as I drop a precious phrase that’s holding me up I have a much stronger piece of writing. Sometimes the original idea for the poem disappears completely and I’m making statements that I didn’t expect to make.

This poem started out as a description of an old rotting door and ended up as:

Front Doors
Do you wonder what’s behind front doors
While wishing for a life that isn't yours?
Do you look at neighbours with regret?
You think you want to live their life and yet...

I bet those neighbours often look at you.
I bet they envy everything you do.
They’d love to have the life they think is yours.
So many things can hide behind front doors.
Rosalind Adam

The idea for Front Doors must have been in my head somewhere but I certainly hadn’t planned to write about that. I don’t know how or why this happens but for me it’s one of the most satisfying things about being a writer.


Tuesday, 13 December 2011

On the "Outside"

These past few days have been exhausting as anyone who has been following the Poetry Space group may have gathered. I found myself faced with what I felt to be an inappropriate post and deleted it.Some people were pleased I had, others felt that they had a right to judge for themselves and in the end I came to the conclusion that they are right . Extreme views as one person put it are possibly best "out in the open where they can be challenged". This is true democracy in action. I have spent many hours examining what led to my decision to press that delete button and I think there were many factors to it. Fear was a big factor. I acted in self-protection .  I was worried about my good name, the reputation I have built up with Poetry Space Showcase and the printed publishing business.This is all to a large extent controllable. On these sites only I only publish material I am comfortable with and that  fit with my view of Poetry Space.

My discussions with family, friends and colleagues have all helped me to clarify my thinking on this and to realise that the forum I have created is not mine. It belongs to everyone who contributes to it and each and every one of us has a different idea of what that space is for. Like a mother who lets her child go out in the world I am now going to let this forum evolve as an entity apart from me and just use the ethical guidelines available to me - that I use all the time in my role as a counsellor. From now on I will rely on the group members themselves to monitor extreme postings and only press that button if I feel the posts breach UK Child Protection legislation and UK Anti Terrorist legislation and if I have to do that I will also record the posts in case they are needed as evidence.

It is hard being on the outside and it is hard being the one making the decisions. There is nowhere to run, nowhere to hide.

Being on the outside is the theme for a poem I wrote very recently for a competition organised by The Bardic Writer's Circle - a lovely group of writers in Caerphilly who set up this competition so that they could raise funds to produce an anthology of their own writing in 2012. I will be meeting them next week to receive my prize and I'll also get to meet Professor Chris Meredith who judged the competition.

This is the poem:


Outside

I am not sure

how  I came to be outside
rather than inside

how  I came to be
on a homemade sledge
gathering speed

how arms and hands
belonging to me could
own another child’s fat warmth

or how
in the bronze twilight
of a winter’s evening
my face
could burn
and freeze
and laugh

all at the same time.

© Susan Jane Sims

All the best for now,

Sue


Judge's comments on Bardic Writer's Circle website